An Original Poem, "Ophelia"

So this is an original poem I composed. I am a BIG fan of Shakespeare's "Hamlet" and I wanted to write a poem from the perspective of the young prince when he learns that his love, Ophelia, has commited suicide. He's at an interesting position, the love of his life leaving him like this. Well, here goes nothing!

You're beautiful

You just fill my heart until it's full

I wish I acted so different

And maybe you would not have lost your mind.

My poetry

It is inspired by your lasting love for me

But now I have suspision

Of this ghostly apparition

I've lost my mind.

Ophelia

Please tell me why you never listened to me

When I told thee

To get thee to a nunnery

Ophelia

I wish things had turned out oh so differently.

I could have saved

You from falling into your watery grave

Now please know I was certain

That the king was in the curtain

But I was wrong.

I'm so sorry

I was preserving my dead father's legacy

You're the one I love

Like the Bard's words, you're beautiful

And I don't know if I can ever move on.

Ophelia

I can only wish that you were still alive.

I died inside

When I learned of your suicide.

Ophelia

I don't know whether to be or not to be.

My life is getting dark

Did I not give you all of my love?

Something's foul in Denmark

Forty-thousand brothers could not match my sum.

Our romance ended so suddenly

When you killed yourself, you killed me.

I just wish that I could see

You love me.

Ophelia

I am really starting to miss your smile

In my denial

I haven't seen it in a while

Ophelia

I wish you were here laying beside of me

Ophelia

I wish you were here 'cause I've gone crazy.